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NOTICE: ALRIGHTY, LETS SEE IF WE CAN GET THIS BACK UP AND RUNNING


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    Saki
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    Post by Saki Fri Dec 16, 2011 9:14 pm

    um...i'm not very good at writing, and I was gonna put this on fanficition.net,but i wasn't sure it was good enough,so I thought i'd post it here first and see what you guys think.I was also planning on writing more,but again not sure I should bother.I'm also not sure if it's prose, poetry,story?I got the feel it from this book I read Psyche in a Dress
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    It was addictive

    the bright dazzling lights, surrounded all

    catching everyone who dared to enter

    Their warm rays so gentle at first

    truly it was as nurturing as a mother’s caress to a newborn

    as beautiful, and magical as they say


    The desperate souls who dragged themselves upwards

    embraced its warmth

    bathed in its light

    lived only off its presence


    They’d dance along in the high of it all

    until their skin burned, sweetly

    marking their once unknown faces


    When the wild bright lights of the day left them, as it always did

    they’d pile away to another source

    Artificially filling them with its nectar

    the bright, bright lights making them forget all else



    -----------------------------------------


    He watched again as another soon fell into

    the sweet entanglement of this world

    It was nothing new

    this place so wonderful and so cruel

    It was his home

    his domain



    He directed movies

    with the same old girls

    iced with the bright gleaming Hollywood lights

    the look of hunger and desire upon their once invisible faces


    Afterwards he’d go out to feed like the others

    His skin, incrusted with the day

    And the natural dye of the lights

    Gave him the look of a an accursed sun god


    -----

    She walked in quietly

    like that gentle wind that caresses one’s cheek

    when you’re lost in thought


    She was different from the rest

    Casting a strange sort of light herself

    with no warmth or glow about it

    Something entirely different

    but just as alluring




    The way she moved so free and elegant

    so different from the wild rhythm of the feeding frenzy

    as if to mock this whole place for its weakness




    As he breathed out the smoke surrounding him like spirits of the undead

    his one desire was then to watch her get caught in the bright lights

    and burn like all those she mocked


    He approached her

    careful to keep himself from becoming caught in her silver lining

    asking if she wanted to be in show biz

    Her eyes a reflection of the ever unfamiliar moon in their strangeness,

    watched him as if in caution

    like an Amazon taking her first steps into the modern world

    Gingerly, least she not be careful and be killed,

    like the stories she was rocked to sleep in

    she danced away,

    --

    The image burned in him brighter than any lights
    Momo
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    Post by Momo Fri Dec 16, 2011 10:12 pm

    This is really cool~
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    Post by Saki Fri Dec 16, 2011 10:32 pm

    ty momo-chan ^///^
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    Post by Momo Sat Dec 17, 2011 2:20 am

    Np. (:

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